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Friday, March 26, 2021
Life In Aotearoa New Zealand
We were learning about life in Aotearoa NZ and the different species of animals and how they have adapted over time.
Hi Chloe, It's Jayda,I really love the bird that you Created! You also used a lot of detail for the description on the bird like its favourite thing to eat is fish. Next time you could maybe choose another font so it's easier to read. I really enjoyed reading your blog post, enjoy your weekend.
Kia ora Chloe, It's Ryder I like the way you created your bird you also put lot of detail in to your bird. And your writing I like how you described everything about your bird but maybe. Next time you could change the font or make your writing bigger so it's easy to read.
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Hi Chloe,
ReplyDeleteIt's Jayda,I really love the bird that you Created! You also used a lot of detail for the description on the bird like its favourite thing to eat is fish. Next time you could maybe choose another font so it's easier to read.
I really enjoyed reading your blog post, enjoy your weekend.
Kia ora Chloe,
ReplyDeleteIt's Ryder I like the way you created your bird you also put lot of detail in to your bird. And your writing I like how you described everything about your bird but maybe. Next time you could change the font or make your writing bigger so it's easy to read.